User talk:ClanWolverine101/Archive 2015

Maria Esteban - New Article[edit]

Maria Esteban is up. For your approval. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:14, 2 February 2015 (PST)

I approve. :) More comments to follow when I've had time to do more than a cursory read of the article. Frabby (talk) 02:43, 3 February 2015 (PST)

2nd new Hessen Irregulars[edit]

Hi! Saw you put an update needed with Field Manual: 3085 on it on that page. I looked at page 160 and just saw Hampton's Hessens listed there. What exactly needs to be added to the page?--Mbear(talk) 10:18, 3 February 2015 (PST)

Mbear - I don't have the book in front of me, but aren't they directly related? ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:46, 3 February 2015 (PST)
Maybe, but what's there is just a deployment page. It says Hampton's Hessens (2 Btns). The 2nd isn't listed by name, which is why I'm confused.--Mbear(talk) 03:19, 4 February 2015 (PST)
At the time, i believed it was actually the same unit. (Or the direct successor of the same unit...) I'm sorry i don't have the books with me at the moment. Feel free to drop the tag if you must. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 05:46, 4 February 2015 (PST)
No problem. I'll just say they were stationed on New Hessen. Thanks!--Mbear(talk) 07:53, 5 February 2015 (PST)

Battle of Harrow's Sun[edit]

The Battle of Harrow's Sun is up. Let me know your thoughts. :) ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:35, 22 March 2015 (PDT)

It looks good, ClanWolverine101. Did make that infobox? I think it good touch, but i wish it was able handle the text better. Its swollen up article the length of the article. I like how you cover the end of the articles with the discrepancies. That's a major problem with old verse new, retrocon by accident and they stick to changes regarding it being right or wrong. Article is maybe bit lengthy, but it good addition! great Work! -- Wrangler (talk) 12:51, 25 March 2015 (PDT)
Thanks! Mbear designed the infobox some time ago. We just haven't used it as much as i'd like. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:50, 25 March 2015 (PDT)

Hi[edit]

Sorry for the late response, iam feeling not so good at this time, i send you a email via sarna when i found time this day about Aris!--Doneve (talk) 03:01, 23 March 2015 (PDT)

Email is sendet.--Doneve (talk) 03:06, 24 March 2015 (PDT)
Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 04:55, 24 March 2015 (PDT)

Ryuken-ichi update[edit]

CW,

You added an update needed tag to Ryuken-ichi for Heir to the dragon. Your comment was " (Heir to the Dragon - reminder - explains why they weren't rebuilt)". Do you have a page number for that in the book? I've been through it and I can't find it. (Must be going blind.)

Thanks!

--Mbear(talk) 07:05, 6 May 2015 (PDT)

Mbear - Yeah - page 342 from the reprinted edition. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 06:27, 8 May 2015 (PDT)
Thanks!--Mbear(talk) 08:23, 8 May 2015 (PDT)

A couple updates[edit]

Hey could you do me a favor? You've tagged 1st Alarion Jaegers, 4th Davion Guards, and 2nd Bolan Guards with updates from two novels but I can't find what you want updated. If you could just add the data, that would be hugely helpful. Thanks!--Mbear(talk) 10:31, 20 May 2015 (PDT)

Mbear - I apologize. I'll try to get to this in a day or two. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 11:06, 21 May 2015 (PDT)
No problem. Like I said, I only asked because I couldn't find what you were talking about. (Maybe I need to have my eyes checked. ;)) Thanks again!--Mbear(talk) 08:02, 22 May 2015 (PDT)
Well, i acknowledge the 4th Davion Guard mention in Black Dragon was brief. Still, i like to data-mine. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:56, 22 May 2015 (PDT)

Wendy Karner[edit]

Wendy Karner is up. She was Kai's ex-GF, which sounds like a sexist putdown. Still, i love data-mining Lethal Heritage. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 18:08, 23 May 2015 (PDT)

Second Combine-Dominion War[edit]

Hi ClanWolverine101. I've responded to your question about the naming practices in my article. Thanks for the compliment by the way. -- Wrangler (talk) 13:11, 26 June 2015 (PDT)

Sharon Bryan - New Article[edit]

Sharon Bryan is up. I don't know what it is about me and the recurring Lyran Generals... ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:09, 4 July 2015 (PDT)

Renny Sanderlin[edit]

Renny Sanderlin is up. He appeared in four books, and therefore merited an article, IMHO. :) ClanWolverine101 (talk) 08:59, 14 July 2015 (PDT)

Great article, i love your minor character bios, cheers ;).--Doneve (talk) 09:21, 14 July 2015 (PDT)
Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 06:01, 15 July 2015 (PDT)
Looks good! The only complaint I have is that there are no headers, but perhaps a short(er) article like that doesn't need it. -BobTheZombie (talk) 20:25, 14 July 2015 (PDT)
Yeah, that was my feeling as well. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 06:01, 15 July 2015 (PDT)

Third Deneb Light Cavalry[edit]

I decided the Third Deneb Light Cavalry needed an article. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 16:45, 17 July 2015 (PDT)

Marialle Radick[edit]

Uploaded File:Marialle Radick.jpg.--Doneve (talk) 22:51, 18 July 2015 (PDT)

Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:31, 19 July 2015 (PDT)

Warner Doles[edit]

I didn't remove anything from the article, actually. I added some reference line and category of real people. I'm more concern that it was personal attack on the person than actual listing of person's happen a connection to Battletech who person history was listed. According to the rules of Sarna.net, i felt i had to note that this article could been posted as attack against the real person. -- Wrangler (talk) 19:37, 19 July 2015 (PDT)

Understood. The links that were on there were obviously disturbing. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:20, 19 July 2015 (PDT)
BrokenMnemonic removed the external links, there was a attack with a link to diffame him as a sexual offender etc. this has nothing to do with sarna, and was immidiatly removed.--Doneve (talk) 23:40, 19 July 2015 (PDT)

Hi[edit]

Please check you e-mail account!--Doneve (talk) 17:56, 25 July 2015 (PDT)

Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:20, 25 July 2015 (PDT)

Marialle Radick - New Article[edit]

Marialle Radick is up. Reviewing my notes, i decided i wanted to write about the most important character who had no entry whatsoever thus far. I decided on Marialle, despite the fact she was usually over-shadowed by Vlad. She never got one of the proper bios in a book like the Era Reports, which made it a challenge. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 14:09, 8 August 2015 (PDT)

Nice article, especially as she completely flew below my radar so far. The name sounded familiar, but I never realized that she was such a prominent character. That said, I feel you glossed over Clan Jade Wolf - did she serve as saKhan there as well? It's only a couple of weeks but it's a tremendously important evolutionary step. (Unfortunately, I lack the knowledge to fill in the gaps myself at this time.) Similarly, you have her positions box as "preceded by Phelan Ward" and "succeeded by Ivan Kerensky" which I feel is factually inaccurate since the New Clan Wolf nee Clan Jade Wolf is distinct from Clan Wolf-in-Exile nee Old Clan Wolf. Hope this makes sense. :) Frabby (talk) 11:45, 9 August 2015 (PDT)
Frabby - I will review how i approached the Jade Wolf situation.
In terms of the rest of it, though, i'm trying to maintain consistency with how Sarna deals with the Wolf split. By and large, Vlad's Crusaders are treated as a continuation of the original Wolves while Phelan's Wolves-in-Exile are treated as a new Clan. (This despite the legal games Vlad played at the time.) Believe me, this is a much larger issue than my one article, and I'd be fine having a discussion about this somewhere. For now, i stand by my decisions in the interests of consistency. Thanks. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 16:02, 9 August 2015 (PDT)

Crawford[edit]

I rolled back your edit on the Crawford article because while it's aesthetically pleasing to have the references run in numerical order at all times, for the history sections I always put them in historical order, so that people can read through in a consistent order and look at maps in terms of before and after in every instance. I'm about a quarter of the way through the 3200 planets at this point, and almost half of those are planets that were settled in the Star League era, so I'm reluctant to change the formatting I've been using in every article. BrokenMnemonic (talk) 09:04, 12 August 2015 (PDT)

BrokenMnemonic - I had been told specifically that listing the references in order was policy. THat's why i've been doing it that way for five years. Can you check with the Admins on this? ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:24, 12 August 2015 (PDT)
As far as I can see there's no formal policy governing this. And personally, I feel this is not an important enough matter to warrant having one, or even to warrant corrections either way. Frabby (talk) 02:26, 13 August 2015 (PDT)
I guess times change. Thanks. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 19:22, 13 August 2015 (PDT)

Pic from Highlander sourcebook[edit]

Her is what you want File:Various BattleMechs.jpg.--Doneve (talk) 07:59, 5 September 2015 (PDT)

Perfect! Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2015 (PDT)

Hanni Schmitt‎[edit]

So - Hanni Schmitt
1) If you are the mother of a founding Khan of Clan Blood Spirit.
2) You made the most memorable last stand in the history of BTech.
3) Your final battle is so legendary it has been chronicled in about a dozen books.
4) You allegedly conspired to preserve House Cameron against Stefan Amaris.
5) Most importantly, you have a Piloting score of 0 and a Gunnery score of 0.
You are notable enough to get your own article. :)
Thanks to Doneve as usual for the pic. I look forward to your comments.
ClanWolverine101 (talk) 19:13, 17 September 2015 (PDT)

Operational Turning Points: Capellan Crusades Question[edit]

Hey Clanwolverine. Are you going to work on main article for the Capellan Crusade article? I was thinking of working on it when the OTP opens up for. -- Wrangler (talk) 10:58, 10 October 2015 (PDT)

I may not have time. Feel free. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 22:18, 12 October 2015 (PDT)

Lucien Carns[edit]

Hi, here the pics File:Lucien Carns 1.jpg and File:Lucien Carns 2.jpg .--Doneve (talk) 06:00, 10 November 2015 (PST)

Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 23:31, 20 November 2015 (PST)

Lucian Carns[edit]

Lucian Carns is up. I've been thinking about this bio since i did Severen Leroux. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 17:44, 11 November 2015 (PST)

Impressive, as always. I think I don't mention often enough how seeing articles like this being put up raises my spirits. And I definitely think you're not getting the acknowledgement you deserve, which I think is mostly because there are still too few dedicated admins here who are already swamped with work. I cannot technically bestow a Superior Article Award on you without committee consensus, but I can give you yet another Good Article Award which is what you deserve at the very least. Good Article Award, 4th ribbon Frabby (talk) 06:21, 28 November 2015 (PST)
Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 12:58, 28 November 2015 (PST)

MI7 Intelligence Secretariat[edit]

Hi, here is the image File:MI7 Intelligence Secretariat.jpg, i removed the gray shadows, i hope it looks ok?--Doneve (talk) 02:00, 21 November 2015 (PST)

Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 23:44, 21 November 2015 (PST)

Intelligence Secretariat[edit]

And .... Intelligence Secretariat is up. Went in a different direction this time. I was always a fan of the FedCom era, and this deserved its own entry. I set up a bunch of redirects to avoid confusion. Thanks as usual to Doneve for the pic. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 15:37, 29 November 2015 (PST)

Carew Nygren[edit]

Carew Nygren is up. I do love my old Blood of Kerensky characters. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 23:12, 15 December 2015 (PST)

3rd Hussars[edit]

Here is the image File:3rd Hussars.jpg.--Doneve (talk) 00:54, 27 December 2015 (PST)

Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 19:41, 27 December 2015 (PST)

3rd Hussars[edit]

I close out the year with this article on the 3rd Hussars (Free Rasalhague Republic). We're still missing a few military units. Let's hope we can trim that list in the new year! Also - Thanks to Doneve for the pic! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:16, 27 December 2015 (PST)