Talk:Daniel Sorenson (31st c.)

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Tidying Up

I'm straightening this one up, trying to fix things so that it flows better. I'm seeing a lot of places where "the" and "a" ought to be, but aren't... And the tenses seem to veer from past to present and back. Nuclear-Fridge (talk) 04:20, 20 June 2013 (PDT)