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Hi CW, you added an update needed to Impetus of War. I've rewritten the page, let me know what you think {{Emoticon| :) }} [[User:Dark Jaguar|Dark Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Dark Jaguar|talk]]) 07:54, 4 June 2016 (PDT)
 
Hi CW, you added an update needed to Impetus of War. I've rewritten the page, let me know what you think {{Emoticon| :) }} [[User:Dark Jaguar|Dark Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Dark Jaguar|talk]]) 07:54, 4 June 2016 (PDT)
 
: Looks good! I'll give it a full look-over soon. [[User:ClanWolverine101|ClanWolverine101]] ([[User talk:ClanWolverine101|talk]]) 13:18, 4 June 2016 (PDT)
 
: Looks good! I'll give it a full look-over soon. [[User:ClanWolverine101|ClanWolverine101]] ([[User talk:ClanWolverine101|talk]]) 13:18, 4 June 2016 (PDT)
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[[Kappa Battalion (Wolf's Dragoons)]] is up. I went back to [[Wolf Pack]] for this one. [[User:ClanWolverine101|ClanWolverine101]] ([[User talk:ClanWolverine101|talk]]) 18:04, 4 June 2016 (PDT)

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FM:SLDF commands

Just FYI: I put an Update Needed on the Category: Star League Defense Force commands talk page so we wouldn't have all 900+ SLDF commands appearing in the Updates Needed listing.--Mbear(talk) 11:54, 4 January 2016 (PST)

I understand. Its just that i've seen many of the units updated, but others not. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 20:25, 4 January 2016 (PST)
No problem. I was going to start on the SLDF units after I got the rest of the Updates Needed list down to ~600, but that plan has since gone up in smoke. ;) --Mbear(talk) 06:40, 5 January 2016 (PST)
So now I've decided to get the SLDF commands out of the way. Hopefully I'll be able to get them all done in a reasonable amount of time.--Mbear(talk) 05:33, 13 January 2016 (PST)
Understood. Good luck! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 15:23, 13 January 2016 (PST)

Taman Malthus

Taman Malthus is up, for your consideration. Wish i had some pics of him... ClanWolverine101 (talk) 14:15, 23 January 2016 (PST)

Hi

Sent you a email, give a response if it works ;).--Doneve (talk) 00:18, 24 January 2016 (PST)

Responded. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 09:11, 24 January 2016 (PST)
Respnded.--Doneve (talk) 10:40, 24 January 2016 (PST)

Sarah Steiner

Sarah Steiner is one of those minor characters who keeps being referenced in passing. I decided she needed an article. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 10:35, 28 January 2016 (PST)

Battle of Morges (3054)

Battle of Morges (3054) is up. Why an article about such a minor battle? Well, it appears in the notes. There's a ton of confusion about when it happened and even who fought in it, so i hoped this would makes things more clear. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 09:19, 2 February 2016 (PST)

I've just read through the article and made a few tweaks - it's an interesting piece, particularly given the confusion in canon over what happened, when, and to whom - and I particularly like the clear and concise list of conflicting detail and sources in the notes section, which is one of the things I think Sarna can be really good at capturing. Most of the tweaks I made were minor grammatical niggles or where you typed one word while thinking of another, but I added in some references for the future battles and clarified the section on the Refusal War battle, which reminded me that some of the other articles relating to it could do with some work. But then, when isn't there something on Sarna that could do with clarification/expansion?
Anyway, I think the article is a useful addition to Sarna, so I'd like to give you this substantial addition award:
Substantial Addition Award, 1st ribbon
I'd also like to ask that you copy/link to the article in various other articles on Sarna to help disseminate the information - the Morges planet article, the Fourth Skye Rangers article, etc. Particularly the Morges article - sooner or later, I'm going to reach Morges as a part of the Project: Planets overhaul, and lots of little details from the battle article like the name of the mountain Jaime Wolf was observing the battle from, the name of the capital city and the like are exactly the sort of details that help flesh out a proper planet article and help writers using Sarna for reference to stay consistent. BrokenMnemonic (talk) 02:55, 3 February 2016 (PST)
Thanks!
With respect to to the copying, i've actually linked it in most of the articles that referred to it at all, though i haven't done this with Morges itself, yet. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:23, 3 February 2016 (PST)
I always feel the need to stick up for the planets articles - they always seem to be the ones left out when it comes to linking detail in Wink.gif BrokenMnemonic (talk) 23:36, 3 February 2016 (PST)
Oh, i get that. But Morges is starting almost from the ground up. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 10:25, 4 February 2016 (PST)

Tara Lucas

I have rewritten my Tara Lucas article. The original had some major mistakes due to my misunderstandings confusing her with the original Tara Lucas. (Her grandmother.) Please give it a look at your convenience. Thanks. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 21:17, 18 February 2016 (PST)

Hi, any idea how i can found a pic. of Tara Lucas, iam on travel and have only my pdf's with me!--Doneve (talk) 00:06, 19 February 2016 (PST)
Thanks! I don't think they ever made one unfortunately. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 22:27, 19 February 2016 (PST)

Esau Olivares

Esau Olivares is up. I love these recurring characters. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 19:49, 10 March 2016 (PST)

It's always lighting up my day, seeing a fine new CW article about an interesting side character. :) Good Article Award, 5th ribbon Frabby (talk) 01:06, 11 March 2016 (PST)
Great article, is there any chance you write for BattleCorps.--Doneve (talk) 21:07, 11 March 2016 (PST)
I don't, but that would be an amazing opportunity. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 18:10, 12 March 2016 (PST)

Beneficence

Hi CW,

I just rolled back your edit on the Beneficence article because in the context, it's more accurate to say that Victor's forces had to retreat under fire than simply to retreat - they were in constant contact with the Loyalist forces on the ground according to the FedCom Civil War sourcebook, with the Fifth Crucis Lancers in battle or being harried at every step because of their slow attached conventional forces, and the evacuation zone for the Allied forces had to move 500 km while they were all retreating because of the number and position of enemy units engaging them. That's very different to them simply retreating, IMO - there are a fair number of planetary occupations where a bigger task force shows up and the occupiers retreat, but this was Victor's forces trying to avoid being wiped out on the ground with the spectre of orbital bombardment hanging over them as they were fighting. There's a difference between evacuating a compound or fortification before you get attacked, and having to try and retreat and board exit vessels while actively being attacked, harried and pursued. I hope that makes sense? BrokenMnemonic (talk) 23:45, 5 April 2016 (PDT)

I don't disagree with that. My concern when i read that was that the grammar was confusing? ClanWolverine101 (talk) 07:58, 6 April 2016 (PDT)

Epsilon Regiment (Wolf's Dragoons)

Epsilon Regiment (Wolf's Dragoons) has been re-written. I want people to know i accepted the critique from BobTheZombie that my Beta Regiment article (posted back in 2013), to heart. As such, this article is about 40 percent shorter, where i trimmed and summarized a lot of redundant material. I feel the end product is superior, and hope others will find it so. At some point, i will go back and perform the needed revisions to Beta Regiment and the other Dragoon articles. But please give Epsilon a look and let me know. Thank you. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 12:57, 16 April 2016 (PDT)

Great article and certainly deserves a reward Substantial Addition Award, 2nd ribbon Dark Jaguar (talk) 02:03, 17 April 2016 (PDT)
Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 16:01, 17 April 2016 (PDT)
I just saw your message and I'll come and look at the article once I get my housekeeping stuff done (I've been gone too long). I'm hoping to be around a lot more regularly as I re-prioritize things in life. It's nice to be back, and I hope to see both you guys around more :) -BobTheZombie (talk) 12:12, 28 May 2016 (PDT)
Welcome back, Zombie! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 15:13, 28 May 2016 (PDT)

Wayside

Your new redirect has created a circular redirect as both pages now point to each other. I thought I'd let you know and not just change things in case you wondered why I was changing your edits. Dark Jaguar (talk) 15:14, 24 April 2016 (PDT)

Ahhh. Okay. Thanks. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 17:16, 24 April 2016 (PDT)

Nadia Winson

Nadia Winson is up for your approval. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 23:48, 20 May 2016 (PDT)

Quick question as I am slightly confused, in the notes section you have her as being a member of House Ward. Is that correct? Surely her bloodhouse is Winson or is this a reference to her earlier linage? Dark Jaguar (talk) 02:48, 28 May 2016 (PDT)
Good call. It was a typo. Fixed! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 15:05, 28 May 2016 (PDT)

Founder's Superior Writer of the Year Award 2015

It's been a pleasure getting to know you and having you write for both the wiki and the news. Thanks! Nicjansma (talk) 06:30, 25 May 2016 (PDT)

Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk) 15:02, 28 May 2016 (PDT)

Jade Falcon units and Mercenaries Supplemental Update

CW,

I'm looking at updating the 1st Falcon Velites, 2nd Falcon Jaegers, Mu Galaxy (CJF), and Rho Galaxy (CJF) articles. The page history shows you added the Update needed with mercenaries supplemental update, but I'll be dipped if I can find any reference to those units in there. Do you have page numbers I can use?

Thanks! --Mbear(talk) 10:06, 1 June 2016 (PDT)

Replied. Thanks! ClanWolverine101 (talk)

Tau Galaxy Clan Smoke Jaguar

Hi CW, you added an update needed to Impetus of War. I've rewritten the page, let me know what you think Smiley.gif Dark Jaguar (talk) 07:54, 4 June 2016 (PDT)

Looks good! I'll give it a full look-over soon. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 13:18, 4 June 2016 (PDT)

Kappa Battalion (Wolf's Dragoons)

Kappa Battalion (Wolf's Dragoons) is up. I went back to Wolf Pack for this one. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 18:04, 4 June 2016 (PDT)