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===Heading Links===
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There ''should'' never be a link in a heading, quiaff? -[[User:BobTheZombie|BobTheZombie]] ([[User talk:BobTheZombie|talk]]) 18:12, 21 October 2013 (PDT)
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==Policy==
 
==Policy==
 
I strongly recommend that this essay become policy. It forms the basis for [[Policy:Italics]] and for several other policies I have in mind, in the arena of Manuals of style. By making it policy directly, we can refer to it in the quest of standardization of articles. --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 23:16, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
 
I strongly recommend that this essay become policy. It forms the basis for [[Policy:Italics]] and for several other policies I have in mind, in the arena of Manuals of style. By making it policy directly, we can refer to it in the quest of standardization of articles. --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 23:16, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
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::::*The [[Kentares Massacre]] is a thing of the past and a finished event within the BT timeline. It is to be referred to in past tense, as it is a past event being reported on.
 
::::*The [[Kentares Massacre]] is a thing of the past and a finished event within the BT timeline. It is to be referred to in past tense, as it is a past event being reported on.
 
::::*The ''[[Locust]]'' ''is'', not ''was'', a 20-ton 'Mech and will remain that forever. Past tense is not applicable and present tense is called for.
 
::::*The ''[[Locust]]'' ''is'', not ''was'', a 20-ton 'Mech and will remain that forever. Past tense is not applicable and present tense is called for.
::::*For OOC articles the same principles apply: [[Far Country]] should be covered in present tense, as should be the plot summary. However, if you would create an article about the ''Telendine'', a specific IC JumpShip that has been lost, you would revert to past tense again because the Telendine is no more and the events leading to its loss are a thing of the past. See ''[[Liberator (Individual JumpShip)|Liberator]]'' as a case in point.
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::::*For OOC articles the same principles apply: [[Far Country]] should be covered in present tense, as should be the plot summary. However, if you would create an article about the ''Telendine'', a specific IC JumpShip that has been lost, you would revert to past tense again because the Telendine is no more and the events leading to its loss are a thing of the past. See ''[[Liberator]]'' as a case in point.
 
::::To sum it up, only events (which occurr at a certain point in time) should be referred to in past tense, and only if they are already over. Similarly, specific/individual vehicles or people should be treated in past tense if they are lost/dead/whatever and the article is looking back. Everything else should be written in present tense.
 
::::To sum it up, only events (which occurr at a certain point in time) should be referred to in past tense, and only if they are already over. Similarly, specific/individual vehicles or people should be treated in past tense if they are lost/dead/whatever and the article is looking back. Everything else should be written in present tense.
 
::::As for timelines, the latest bit of information always sets the viewpoint. Anything else would not make sense because you would otherwise end up reporting on future events. I'd like to add here that, as a contributor and BTW author, I consider myself a real person outside of any BT timeline. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] 14:41, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 
::::As for timelines, the latest bit of information always sets the viewpoint. Anything else would not make sense because you would otherwise end up reporting on future events. I'd like to add here that, as a contributor and BTW author, I consider myself a real person outside of any BT timeline. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] 14:41, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
:::::Based on that last statement, now I am confused. It seems then that tenses change dependent upon what type of in-character (i.e., a subject not in the Real World, like [[FASA]] or [[Randall Bills]], but [[Illium Naval Engineering|Illium Shipyards]] and [[Kai Allard-Liao]]) article is being written: dead, alive, presumed dead/missing, currently utilized, currently active, destroyed. So are we writing from the perspective of 3076? Or are we writing from 3139 (as Dark Age stories are being written for BattleCorps)? Some subjects exist in 'the now' in both time lines. An Editor writing from the perspective of the MechWarrior video game reboot may talk about the invasion of [[Deshler]] as it is happening now, while if Deshler is the subject of Jihad Turning Points: 3078, then it too will be present tense. Plus the assassination of Lord Muckety-Muck in 3140 on Deshler is also present tense. The reader could be quite confused.  
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:::::Based on that last statement, now I am confused. It seems then that tenses change dependent upon what type of in-character (i.e., a subject not in the Real World, like [[FASA]] or [[Randall Bills]], but [[Illium Shipyards]] and [[Kai Allard-Liao]]) article is being written: dead, alive, presumed dead/missing, currently utilized, currently active, destroyed. So are we writing from the perspective of 3076? Or are we writing from 3139 (as Dark Age stories are being written for BattleCorps)? Some subjects exist in 'the now' in both time lines. An Editor writing from the perspective of the MechWarrior video game reboot may talk about the invasion of [[Deshler]] as it is happening now, while if Deshler is the subject of Jihad Turning Points: 3078, then it too will be present tense. Plus the assassination of Lord Muckety-Muck in 3140 on Deshler is also present tense. The reader could be quite confused.  
 
:::::Yes, I am a real person, and I, even as an admin, would see numerous discussions taking place as to whether or not the tense was correct, depending on each particular Editor's POV. As a contributor, as well as an admin, I'm not interested in mediating such debates as to which takes precendence 'this time' for 'this article', when it can be solved with a simple policy of 'this happened then.' To be honest, as a historian yourself, I'd have thought you'd prefer the past-tense.
 
:::::Yes, I am a real person, and I, even as an admin, would see numerous discussions taking place as to whether or not the tense was correct, depending on each particular Editor's POV. As a contributor, as well as an admin, I'm not interested in mediating such debates as to which takes precendence 'this time' for 'this article', when it can be solved with a simple policy of 'this happened then.' To be honest, as a historian yourself, I'd have thought you'd prefer the past-tense.
 
:::::I understand your point about the ''Locust''. WP does something similar, writing about a current tank (M1A1) in the present tense, while using the past tense for the M4. But, I don't see the downside in writing from the past tense for any article.  
 
:::::I understand your point about the ''Locust''. WP does something similar, writing about a current tank (M1A1) in the present tense, while using the past tense for the M4. But, I don't see the downside in writing from the past tense for any article.  
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::::::"Other italicized words include all foreign language and ranks (with the exception of the Lyran Alliance/Commonwealth ranks) as well as traditional Clan words: ''ja, wakarimas-ka, Tai-sa, seyla, surat''." [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 03:05, 20 November 2013 (PST)
 
::::::"Other italicized words include all foreign language and ranks (with the exception of the Lyran Alliance/Commonwealth ranks) as well as traditional Clan words: ''ja, wakarimas-ka, Tai-sa, seyla, surat''." [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 03:05, 20 November 2013 (PST)
 
:::::::I'm relieved to know that I've been trying to follow the right format, even if only by accident. If the wiki is supposed to be following the BC style guide, then that definitely needs to be made clearer - I had no idea, and I've read a lot of the policies here to try and avoid screwing up when I'm working. If there's a more up to date version on LIMDIS within the writer community then I'd recommend asking the author/controller of that document (Jason?) for permission to incorporate it into the policies here, assuming that there's nothing privileged or covered by an NDA within it. It may simply be that the BC website hasn't been updated to make it a public document yet? [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 00:37, 21 November 2013 (PST)
 
:::::::I'm relieved to know that I've been trying to follow the right format, even if only by accident. If the wiki is supposed to be following the BC style guide, then that definitely needs to be made clearer - I had no idea, and I've read a lot of the policies here to try and avoid screwing up when I'm working. If there's a more up to date version on LIMDIS within the writer community then I'd recommend asking the author/controller of that document (Jason?) for permission to incorporate it into the policies here, assuming that there's nothing privileged or covered by an NDA within it. It may simply be that the BC website hasn't been updated to make it a public document yet? [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 00:37, 21 November 2013 (PST)
::::::::I have asked about the other, newer BC style guide document but alas, I received no answer and until someone from BC says otherwise I feel bound by my NDA. Sorry. What I can do, however, is to check if there are any actual changes or additional guidelines and maybe paraphrase them. But it will be a while - the year is ending and like always, I'm buried in work and have little time for BT until around the end of January. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 00:57, 21 November 2013 (PST)
 
:::::::::Another question is BC our style policy? I set up also some questions to the guys and became no answer, very sadly and clear not all questions.--[[User:Doneve|Doneve]] ([[User talk:Doneve|talk]]) 20:33, 29 November 2013 (PST)
 
 
==Heading Links==
 
There should never be a link in a heading, right? -[[User:BobTheZombie|BobTheZombie]] ([[User talk:BobTheZombie|talk]]) 15:07, 24 February 2014 (PST)
 
:That's right - putting links in heading breaks the default formatting of titles for the articles. Or at least, I've always assumed that's why it shouldn't be done. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 11:47, 2 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
==Floating Text Question and Unit Descriptions==
 
Howdy, I would like to ask if there was a way to address something that been troubling to me.  Articles on say, Regiment's information usually appears on the top of the page.  I've written on Sarna for number of years, I've always found the text describing combat formation on the top of a page highly annoying and I've felt with text being separated by a content box and allowed to "Float" on the top of the article, would be missed by someone casually reading the article.  I personally like the Unit Description section, since its gives brief heads up on what feature article is all about.  Is it a Combat Vehicle Regiment a famous independent Aerospace Wing?  Having the information to tell what heck the unit is about in the history doesn't always work.  Some these formations don't have alot of history in them, but have done something to be notable enough be featured in article.  The point of this, there been question having something like a Unit Description in article from keeping the description of the unit "floating" out of sight sometimes from rest of the article is good thing?  I know alot of us know Battletech and history, but the readers may NOT know it. I'd like make sure at least there section giving the break down what article is about, keeping at eye level. What do you guys think? --[[User:Wrangler|Wrangler]] ([[User talk:Wrangler|talk]]) 15:37, 3 August 2014 (PDT)
 
:I personally like the "floating text" simply because it is above the contents box as some of the contents boxes can get pretty lengthy, but yes we need to discuss this and make a guideline on it.--[[User:Dmon|Dmon]] ([[User talk:Dmon|talk]]) 13:44, 4 August 2014 (PDT)
 
::I also like the floating text. It's a quick summary of the page content, with more detailed information later in the article. Plus it's easy to use the <nowiki><onlyinclude></nowiki> tags to pull that data into another page (like the Brigade page or Army page).--[[User:Mbear|Mbear]]<sup>([[User_talk:Mbear|talk]])</sup> 05:14, 14 August 2014 (PDT)
 
:::I guess I'm in the minority in this subject. -- [[User:Wrangler|Wrangler]] ([[User talk:Wrangler|talk]]) 05:40, 14 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
==Updated Style Guide==
 
I've finally incorporated information from the BattleCorps Style Guide into the Policy page. Please review and comment on [[User:Mbear/StyleGuideUpdate]]. (Mostly I've just copied and pasted the relevant portions of the BCSG into the appropriate sections.)--[[User:Mbear|Mbear]]<sup>([[User_talk:Mbear|talk]])</sup> 05:14, 14 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
==Title Capitalization==
 
Hello all, PerkinsC brought up the fact that I changed many of the words "Battle Armor" in titles to the lowercase version because they are lowercase by nature. Is what I was doing wrong? Should the titles be reverted? -[[User:BobTheZombie|BobTheZombie]] ([[User talk:BobTheZombie|talk]]) 19:37, 19 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
:If it's in a title, it should be capitalized. --[[User:Trifler|Trifler]] ([[User talk:Trifler|talk]]) 20:48, 19 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
::[[User:Mbear|Mbear]] has a draft update of the Manual of Style in his sandbox at the moment, incorporating the BattleCorps writer's guidelines laid down by CGL. That includes a section on the capitalization of various different technological beasts - I'd recommend putting the question to him, and possibly to Frabby as well (who's a working BC author). [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 00:30, 20 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
:::I have an updated and much more polished BattleCorps Style Guide document than what is publicly available on the BC homepage, but this document unfortunately isn't in the public domain so I cannot share it with you. It does explicitly say that "battle armor" (also battlesuit, powered armor, small craft, aerospace fighter, vehicle/tank, infantry) is always written in all lowercase, though of course even lowercase words may be capitalized in titles, headers and the like. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 01:34, 20 August 2014 (PDT)
 
::::Now that I think about it, it is a given to capitalize all major words in a title except the articles (a, an, the), so I dunno why I even did the BA --> ba in titles or had to ask this. When I left the note I was quite out of it and felt bad for promising it and not posting right away. Sorry for the waste of time. I will change all those back. -[[User:BobTheZombie|BobTheZombie]] ([[User talk:BobTheZombie|talk]]) 14:28, 20 August 2014 (PDT)
 
 
== Pluralization ==
 
 
Is there a policy about the plural form of "cannon" and its descendants?
 
 
# One cannon -> many ?????
 
# One autocannon -> many ?????
 
# One AC/10 -> many ?????
 
# One PPC -> many ?????
 
# One LB 20-X -> many ?????
 
 
For all five, I lean toward the plural form as being the same as the singular, for the sole reason that if we add 's' to the end, then number 3 should technically be "ACs/10" (aka autocannons/10), because "10" is an modifier to "autocannon", but I defer to BTW's opinion
 
 
[[Special:Contributions/75.23.228.139|75.23.228.139]] 22:25, 11 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
:My suggestion would be to just append an "s". It seems clearly correct in most cases anyways; and regarding "AC/10s" I would argue that you speak/pronounce it as "class ten autocannons" (much like "i.e." is spoken as "that is"). [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 04:48, 12 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
:: Traditionally, the plural of cannon is cannon, so autocannon should be autocannon, but -s plurals are allowable. It's become so common I don't even bother changing it. My suggested list:
 
::# One cannon -> many cannon(s)
 
::# One autocannon -> many autocannon(s)
 
::# One AC/10 -> many AC/10s (no apostrophe)
 
::# One PPC -> many PPCs (no apostrophe)
 
::# One LB 20-X -> many LB 20-X autocannon(s), because it's easier to reword it than decide how to write it
 
:: [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 14:11, 16 September 2022 (EDT)
 
 
== Consensus on organizational/ethnic adjectives ==
 
 
I didn't see any policies/style guides that related to the following topic....maybe it deserves to be codified?
 
 
Recommendation 1: When using a particular organization as an adjective, please do not abbreviate individual words
 
 
* Examples: Capellan Confederation, Federated Suns
 
* Not Preferred: CapCon, FedSuns
 
* Preferred: Confederation (or CCAF for military topics), ????? (or AFFS for military topics)
 
 
Recommendation 2: Please refrain from using "oriental"/"Oriental", because those adjectives have different meanings, depending on the reader's perspective.
 
 
* Example: The Ha Otoko has oriental inspired stylings.
 
* Preferred: The Ha Otoko has Japanese (or Draconian) inspired stylings.
 
 
Not sure if having a Policy about Recommendation 2 is opening up a can of worms or not.
 
 
[[Special:Contributions/75.23.228.139|75.23.228.139]] 16:40, 15 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
: R1: Most are obvious; Suns is probably easiest for the F.S.
 
: R2: Simpler just to use Japanese/Korean/Chinese; I'd avoid Draconian unless it's something unique to the Combine.
 
 
: Now for the real question: Is it Solaran or Solarian? Usage seems roughly equal on this wiki. [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 18:58, 15 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
:: Regarding the demonym/adjective for Solaris, it's ambiguously defined in canon sources, as per RoosterBoy's post (https://bg.battletech.com/forums/the-successor-states/demonyms-of-the-inner-sphere/?PHPSESSID=revu3kmkc62uf5dae3rur5bfg0)
 
 
:: I present a more archaic question: Venerean or Venusian? [[Special:Contributions/75.23.228.139|75.23.228.139]] 14:09, 16 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
::: That could get messy. [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 14:31, 16 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
So, I'm trying to apply this recommendation to topics regarding Rasalhague, Arkab Legions, the 44th Dieron Regulars and the First Hidden War. Unfortunately, the canon context for "Oriental" isn't always clear. Sometimes it seems to be a standin for "Japanese", othertimes, it seems to be a stand-in for "East Asian". Cribbed from the 44th Dieron's article, as an example:
 
 
"The Forty-fourth's insignia was an Oriental dragon drawn in more crude style compared to the one featured in the [[House Kurita]] crest."
 
 
Oriental in that context is ambiguous, and doesn't seem to add in further describing the type of dragon. I opted to remove the "Oriental" completely from the article.
 
 
[[Special:Contributions/75.23.228.139|75.23.228.139]] 14:58, 19 September 2022 (EDT)
 
 
== Quotation marks ==
 
 
I took a brief look at the page tonight and noticed use of American (") vs. British (') quotes is inconsistent. Is this deliberate or is it okay to switch it all over to American-style? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 00:03, 27 August 2022 (EDT)
 
 
== Capitalization of weapons/equipment ==
 
 
Hi all.
 
 
I was under the impression that generic weapons without reference to manufacturer were supposed to be lower case (unless listed at the beginning of a sentence, or used as an article name).
 
 
For example, I thought the following passage was using appropriate capitalization for weapons, as per what I've observed on Sarna:
 
 
''"Kevin's AWS-8Q was having a few problems. The severed power feed to his 'Mech's right arm rendered that arm's '''particle projection cannon''' useless, so he was down to two operational PPCs. His '''small laser''' was also exhibiting intermittent electromagnetic anomalies, so Kevin wrote that weapon off as well."''
 
 
However, I've seen some recent edits that capitalize every word in a generic weapon ("'''Small Laser'''" instead of "'''small laser'''").
 
 
When I went to Sarna's style guide for capitalization, I realized that this policy article doesn't even suggest what the recommended capitalization is.
 
 
Therefore, I ask....what is the recommended capitalization for unbranded/generic weapons that aren't at the beginning of a sentence and aren't the name of an article?
 
 
[[Special:Contributions/98.191.253.34|98.191.253.34]] 12:30, 16 September 2022 (EDT)
 
 
: It's a recent change and some editors may have missed the new policy. I mentioned it to two or three but I'm always afraid I'll word things in a way that seems like an attack. The infobox lists certainly confuse me.
 
 
: The wording desperately needs reworded into plainer language, with some examples that aren't exceptions. I'll leave that to somebody who worked on the project. [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 14:22, 16 September 2022 (EDT)
 
 
:: Updated title to include equipment as well.
 
 
:: As an example, what is the recommended form of the following?
 
 
:: "Heat Sinks = 195 single '''Heat Sinks'''" (cribbed from [[Titan_(DropShip_class)]] article infobox) (I would assume that the preferred form would be "'''single heat sinks'''").
 
:: "chassis=Type W3 '''Endo-Steel'''" (cribbed from [[Timber_Wolf_(Mad_Cat)]] article infobox) (I would assume that the preferred form would be "'''endo steel'''" or "'''endo-steel'''")
 
:: "armor= Composite A-2 '''ferro-fibrous'''" (cribbed from [[Timber_Wolf_(Mad_Cat)]] article infobox) (I would assume that the capitalization is correct)
 
 
:: [[Special:Contributions/98.191.253.34|98.191.253.34]] 15:43, 16 September 2022 (EDT)
 
 
::: I've been (slowly) changing heat sinks to read simply single or double, as Heat Sinks is already given: '''10 <nowiki>[[Heat Sink]]s</nowiki>''' becomes '''10 <nowiki>[[Heat Sink|single]]</nowiki>''' and '''10 <nowiki>[[Double Heat Sink]]s</nowiki>''' becomes '''10 <nowiki>[[Double Heat Sink|double]]</nowiki>'''.
 
::: Chassis entries should follow the case of the model. Using the ''Mad Cat'' entry from TRO:3050U, the chassis should appear as '''Type W3 Endo-steel''', not '''Type W3 endo steel'''.
 
::: I'd apply the same policy to armor. I think whoever changed '''Composite A-2 Ferro-Fibrous''' to '''Composite A-2 ferro-fibrous''' went too far. [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 18:08, 16 September 2022 (EDT)
 
 
== Dates ==
 
 
Related to an active discussion on Discord, I am crafting a section in regards to date formats to add to this manual.  Please feel free to comment and suggest revisions.  I have some questions that I will pose here once I have included the current draft.  --[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 21:01, 6 November 2022 (EST)
 
 
Actually I will add the draft here, not in the article itself, at least until the final version is settled.
 
 
:* If a numerical format is required, such as for tables or contexts where conciseness or the ability to sort is needed, use YYYY-MM-DD (extended ISO format).  Where the day is omitted, use YYYY-MM.  Where the day and month is omitted use YYYY.
 
:: ''Ex: 2022-11-06, 2022-11, and 2022''
 
:* Full dates are formatted Month DD, YYYY or DD Month YYYY (e.g., November 6, 2022 or 6 November 2022), using the date format of the context most closely tied to the article.  The same date format should be used throughout an article.
 
:**For articles concerning real-life events and products, the default date format is American date format (month first) (e.g., November 6, 2022).  [For articles that are strongly and solely tied to the real life events or products occurring in another country or a context (such as the American military) that employs a different date format, the date format of that context may be used.]
 
:**For articles concerning in-universe background and events, that date format typical to the source or in-universe context should be used.
 
:* Dates that are part of titles or quotations should be left in their original format.
 
 
 
I have two questions
 
 
1) Should the bracketed exception clause under point 2, subppoint 1, be included or omitted?  I am open to that type of exception, but I also understand that it could complicate things.  (We do have some pages that concern foreign language products, but we also have some pages like the individual novel pages that with concern both American and foreign versions. The latter should definitely stick with the default.  Also we have pages about real-life people and it could be argued whether the person's country of domicile might affect date formatting.  So the situation could potentially grow hairy.  Removing this explicit exception clause might simplify things.)
 
 
2) Do we have a conclusive picture of what the in-universe date formatting looks like?  Is such consistent? Can we make the point 2, subpoint 2 more complete?
 
 
 
--[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 21:15, 6 November 2022 (EST)
 
 
== CGL excerpt ==
 
 
Looks like ''touman'' is never capitalised but is always italicised, judging by the excerpt. This directly contradicts use in some recent products where the opposite is used when referring to it in operation: Clan Fluffy Slippers' ''touman'' but the Clan Fluffy Bunny Slippers Touman, always a clumsy distinction.
 
 
Should we assume the excerpt is definitive? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 18:42, 1 December 2022 (EST)
 
:I agree it's somewhat weird and counterintuitive, but yes. The Writer's Bible is explicit in this case. Clan formations are capitalized, ''touman'' is not but is always italicized. And yes, even CGL editors don't always heed the rules 100% on this. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 02:44, 2 December 2022 (EST)
 
 
== Either versus Each ==
 
I have just made an edit to the Flashman Battlemech page.
 
 
Original:
 
 
These are backed up by five Ichiba 3000 medium lasers, two mounted in either arm coaxial to the large lasers, one in either side torso, and one which is mounted in the rear of the 'Mech to ward off attackers.
 
 
This could imply that two medium lasers can be mounted in '''either''' the left or the right arm and one in either the left torso '''or''' the right torso.
 
 
Edited:
 
 
These are backed up by five Ichiba 3000 medium lasers, one mounted in each arm coaxial to the large lasers, one in each side torso, and one which is mounted in the rear of the 'Mech to ward off attackers.
 
 
To avoid ambiguity: '''Either''' should always be used in the sense of an alternative and should be accompanied by '''or''', except in the most informal usage.
 

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