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Line 19: Named for the [[Ilsa Liao|first Capellan Chancellor to die in battle]],<ref name=FM3085-23>''Field Manual: 3085'', p. 23 "Capellan Confederation - Capellan Hussars - Red Lancers"</ref> Ilsa was the oldest child of [[Sun-Tzu Liao]] and [[Naomi Centrella]]. Born out of wedlock, she was not formally in the line of succession until her father officially adopted her following the announcement on the 20th of February [[3069]] that Sun-Tzu and Naomi were engaged.<ref>''Jihad Hot Spots: 3070'', p. 42 Line of Succession Secured! - Official announcement of Ilsa's adoption and her succession secured.</ref><ref name="J:FRp45">''Jihad: Final Reckoning'', p. 46, "The Jihad In Review"</ref> However, once [[Daoshen Liao]] was born Ilsa was removed from the line of succession.<ref name="ER:3145p111">''Era Report: 3145'', p. 111, "Ilsa Centrella"</ref> Named for the [[Ilsa Liao|first Capellan Chancellor to die in battle]],<ref name=FM3085-23>''Field Manual: 3085'', p. 23 "Capellan Confederation - Capellan Hussars - Red Lancers"</ref> Ilsa was the oldest child of [[Sun-Tzu Liao]] and [[Naomi Centrella]]. Born out of wedlock, she was not formally in the line of succession until her father officially adopted her following the announcement on the 20th of February [[3069]] that Sun-Tzu and Naomi were engaged.<ref>''Jihad Hot Spots: 3070'', p. 42 Line of Succession Secured! - Official announcement of Ilsa's adoption and her succession secured.</ref><ref name="J:FRp45">''Jihad: Final Reckoning'', p. 46, "The Jihad In Review"</ref> However, once [[Daoshen Liao]] was born Ilsa was removed from the line of succession.<ref name="ER:3145p111">''Era Report: 3145'', p. 111, "Ilsa Centrella"</ref> − Already as stunningly beautiful as her mother, Ilsa was sixteen years old when she was named the honorary ''[[sang-shao]]'' of the elite [[Red Lancers]], a unit whose nickname of the "Red Heart Guards" honored the loss of her namesake. The Lancers staged a full military parade on her birthday, posters of the young Ilsa posing with several of the Guards atop the canopy of a ''[[Men Shen]]'' [[OmniMech]] widely distributed across both the Confederation and Magistracy in its wake.<ref name=FM3085-23/> + Already as stunningly beautiful as her mother, Ilsa was sixteen years old when she was named the honorary ''[[sang-shao]]'' of the elite [[Red Lancers]], a unit whose nickname of the "Red Heart Guards" honoured the loss of her namesake. The Lancers staged a full military parade on her birthday, posters of the young Ilsa posing with several of the Guards atop the canopy of a ''[[Men Shen]]'' [[OmniMech]] widely distributed across both the Confederation and Magistracy in its wake.<ref name=FM3085-23/> Ilsa was a shrewd manipulator, able to use her beauty and intelligence to achieve her goals. Possessed of the same cunning her father displayed along with the political skills of the Centrellas. Many dignitaries from foreign realms were outmaneuvered skillfully by Ilsa, only realizing what had happened to them later; while Ilsa gave every appearance of being aloof and imperious, she also was able to charm even the most dubious cynic.<ref name="ER:3145p111"/> To Ilsa, the welfare of the Magistracy of Canopus came first, and the welfare of the Capellan Confederation came second; her own personal well-being came behind both.<ref name="ER:3145p199"/> Ilsa was a shrewd manipulator, able to use her beauty and intelligence to achieve her goals. Possessed of the same cunning her father displayed along with the political skills of the Centrellas. Many dignitaries from foreign realms were outmaneuvered skillfully by Ilsa, only realizing what had happened to them later; while Ilsa gave every appearance of being aloof and imperious, she also was able to charm even the most dubious cynic.<ref name="ER:3145p111"/> To Ilsa, the welfare of the Magistracy of Canopus came first, and the welfare of the Capellan Confederation came second; her own personal well-being came behind both.<ref name="ER:3145p199"/>
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Named for the [[Ilsa Liao|first Capellan Chancellor to die in battle]],<ref name=FM3085-23>''Field Manual: 3085'', p. 23 "Capellan Confederation - Capellan Hussars - Red Lancers"</ref> Ilsa was the oldest child of [[Sun-Tzu Liao]] and [[Naomi Centrella]]. Born out of wedlock, she was not formally in the line of succession until her father officially adopted her following the announcement on the 20th of February [[3069]] that Sun-Tzu and Naomi were engaged.<ref>''Jihad Hot Spots: 3070'', p. 42 Line of Succession Secured! - Official announcement of Ilsa's adoption and her succession secured.</ref><ref name="J:FRp45">''Jihad: Final Reckoning'', p. 46, "The Jihad In Review"</ref> However, once [[Daoshen Liao]] was born Ilsa was removed from the line of succession.<ref name="ER:3145p111">''Era Report: 3145'', p. 111, "Ilsa Centrella"</ref> | Named for the [[Ilsa Liao|first Capellan Chancellor to die in battle]],<ref name=FM3085-23>''Field Manual: 3085'', p. 23 "Capellan Confederation - Capellan Hussars - Red Lancers"</ref> Ilsa was the oldest child of [[Sun-Tzu Liao]] and [[Naomi Centrella]]. Born out of wedlock, she was not formally in the line of succession until her father officially adopted her following the announcement on the 20th of February [[3069]] that Sun-Tzu and Naomi were engaged.<ref>''Jihad Hot Spots: 3070'', p. 42 Line of Succession Secured! - Official announcement of Ilsa's adoption and her succession secured.</ref><ref name="J:FRp45">''Jihad: Final Reckoning'', p. 46, "The Jihad In Review"</ref> However, once [[Daoshen Liao]] was born Ilsa was removed from the line of succession.<ref name="ER:3145p111">''Era Report: 3145'', p. 111, "Ilsa Centrella"</ref> | ||
| − | Already as stunningly beautiful as her mother, Ilsa was sixteen years old when she was named the honorary ''[[sang-shao]]'' of the elite [[Red Lancers]], a unit whose nickname of the "Red Heart Guards" | + | Already as stunningly beautiful as her mother, Ilsa was sixteen years old when she was named the honorary ''[[sang-shao]]'' of the elite [[Red Lancers]], a unit whose nickname of the "Red Heart Guards" honoured the loss of her namesake. The Lancers staged a full military parade on her birthday, posters of the young Ilsa posing with several of the Guards atop the canopy of a ''[[Men Shen]]'' [[OmniMech]] widely distributed across both the Confederation and Magistracy in its wake.<ref name=FM3085-23/> |
Ilsa was a shrewd manipulator, able to use her beauty and intelligence to achieve her goals. Possessed of the same cunning her father displayed along with the political skills of the Centrellas. Many dignitaries from foreign realms were outmaneuvered skillfully by Ilsa, only realizing what had happened to them later; while Ilsa gave every appearance of being aloof and imperious, she also was able to charm even the most dubious cynic.<ref name="ER:3145p111"/> To Ilsa, the welfare of the Magistracy of Canopus came first, and the welfare of the Capellan Confederation came second; her own personal well-being came behind both.<ref name="ER:3145p199"/> | Ilsa was a shrewd manipulator, able to use her beauty and intelligence to achieve her goals. Possessed of the same cunning her father displayed along with the political skills of the Centrellas. Many dignitaries from foreign realms were outmaneuvered skillfully by Ilsa, only realizing what had happened to them later; while Ilsa gave every appearance of being aloof and imperious, she also was able to charm even the most dubious cynic.<ref name="ER:3145p111"/> To Ilsa, the welfare of the Magistracy of Canopus came first, and the welfare of the Capellan Confederation came second; her own personal well-being came behind both.<ref name="ER:3145p199"/> | ||