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Line 15: ==Plot summary== ==Plot summary== On a base of Umka's militia, MechWarrior Will screams at his unit buddy, Ken, to make him paint his 'Mech, as he was losing time trying to impress a female tech, but Ken barely listens him. On a base of Umka's militia, MechWarrior Will screams at his unit buddy, Ken, to make him paint his 'Mech, as he was losing time trying to impress a female tech, but Ken barely listens him. − Three days later, the militia commander, Azzat, gathers all his unit to face a crisis: they had received a message from a unit of [[Clan Jade Falcon]]s announcing their intention to claim the planet. Will was a veteran from the [[Battle of Tukayyid (3052)|Battle of Tukayyid]], and immediately founds the challenge and words strange, but was unable to recognize why. Azzat asks him advice, but Will wasn't able to help him. When the gathering finishes, his buddy Adetutu boards him in private, and he, which hadn't talked about his life's loss on Tukayyid, explains her everything. + Three days later, the militia commander, Azzat, gathers all his unit to face a crisis: they had received a message from a unit of [[Clan Jade Falcon]]s announcing their intention to claim the planet. Will was a veteran from the [[Battle of Tukayyid]], and immediately founds the challenge and words strange, but was unable to recognize why. Azzat asks him advice, but Will wasn't able to help him. When the gathering finishes, his buddy Adetutu boards him in private, and he, which hadn't talked about his life's loss on Tukayyid, explains her everything. Three days later, the militia arrived to a fishing village, Tenelid. The ''Clanners'' had torched the entire village, murdering almost all the population. That increases Will's suspiciouns: that was more the way of pirates, not clanners. After rescuing a few survivors, they began pursuing the attackers. Three days later, the militia arrived to a fishing village, Tenelid. The ''Clanners'' had torched the entire village, murdering almost all the population. That increases Will's suspiciouns: that was more the way of pirates, not clanners. After rescuing a few survivors, they began pursuing the attackers. A battle ensued, and the presumed clanners, which were all using Inner Sphere 'Mechs, went to Ken specifically, and Ken broke formation, attacking them recklessly. Adetutu's 'Mech was wounded, and that enraged Will. After the ''clanners'' had been disposed, he quickly wents to help Adetutu, finding her alive. A battle ensued, and the presumed clanners, which were all using Inner Sphere 'Mechs, went to Ken specifically, and Ken broke formation, attacking them recklessly. Adetutu's 'Mech was wounded, and that enraged Will. After the ''clanners'' had been disposed, he quickly wents to help Adetutu, finding her alive.
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On a base of Umka's militia, MechWarrior Will screams at his unit buddy, Ken, to make him paint his 'Mech, as he was losing time trying to impress a female tech, but Ken barely listens him. | On a base of Umka's militia, MechWarrior Will screams at his unit buddy, Ken, to make him paint his 'Mech, as he was losing time trying to impress a female tech, but Ken barely listens him. | ||
| − | Three days later, the militia commander, Azzat, gathers all his unit to face a crisis: they had received a message from a unit of [[Clan Jade Falcon]]s announcing their intention to claim the planet. Will was a veteran from the [[ | + | Three days later, the militia commander, Azzat, gathers all his unit to face a crisis: they had received a message from a unit of [[Clan Jade Falcon]]s announcing their intention to claim the planet. Will was a veteran from the [[Battle of Tukayyid]], and immediately founds the challenge and words strange, but was unable to recognize why. Azzat asks him advice, but Will wasn't able to help him. When the gathering finishes, his buddy Adetutu boards him in private, and he, which hadn't talked about his life's loss on Tukayyid, explains her everything. |
Three days later, the militia arrived to a fishing village, Tenelid. The ''Clanners'' had torched the entire village, murdering almost all the population. That increases Will's suspiciouns: that was more the way of pirates, not clanners. After rescuing a few survivors, they began pursuing the attackers. | Three days later, the militia arrived to a fishing village, Tenelid. The ''Clanners'' had torched the entire village, murdering almost all the population. That increases Will's suspiciouns: that was more the way of pirates, not clanners. After rescuing a few survivors, they began pursuing the attackers. | ||
A battle ensued, and the presumed clanners, which were all using Inner Sphere 'Mechs, went to Ken specifically, and Ken broke formation, attacking them recklessly. Adetutu's 'Mech was wounded, and that enraged Will. After the ''clanners'' had been disposed, he quickly wents to help Adetutu, finding her alive. | A battle ensued, and the presumed clanners, which were all using Inner Sphere 'Mechs, went to Ken specifically, and Ken broke formation, attacking them recklessly. Adetutu's 'Mech was wounded, and that enraged Will. After the ''clanners'' had been disposed, he quickly wents to help Adetutu, finding her alive. | ||