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I looked into finding references to the article's nameThere is no mentioned during the time period when these events happened that used the name Scatter. Scatter is not used anywhere for a lyran military operation. Both the Handbook: House Steiner & House Steiner (The Lyran Commonwealth) both use name Long March for this military offensive. Article if retained should be re-named Long March Offensive.  I have no idea where Scatter came from. -- [[User:Wrangler|Wrangler]] 02:40, 16 November 2009 (UTC)
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I've been able to fish out missing information for the article, to do arthur justice in their effortsAs I was not as formilliar with this piece of Lyran's information as well as others. There still missing things and questions I have about it. -- [[User:Wrangler|Wrangler]] 12:53, 16 November 2009 (UTC)

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I've been able to fish out missing information for the article, to do arthur justice in their efforts. As I was not as formilliar with this piece of Lyran's information as well as others. There still missing things and questions I have about it. -- Wrangler 12:53, 16 November 2009 (UTC)