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Trish is mystified by the scene around Franklin's grave. She surmises that his death was an execution, rather than a battle, but cannot puzzle out the scorched bone fragments ingloriously covered with a Widowmaker cloak (Karrige) or the grave marker for McEvedy without an actual grave. A distraught Trish asks Hallis what she must do now that he's dead. A Wolverine survivor, who Trish disbelievingly recognized as a fellow warrior, comes out of the jungle and approaches her as she stands over Franklin's grave and wonders what to do. The woman is heavily scarred, and hobbled badly from her injuries. Reassured by the warrior that their people would survive so long as a single member lives, Trish hugs the survivor and finds renewed hope.
 
Trish is mystified by the scene around Franklin's grave. She surmises that his death was an execution, rather than a battle, but cannot puzzle out the scorched bone fragments ingloriously covered with a Widowmaker cloak (Karrige) or the grave marker for McEvedy without an actual grave. A distraught Trish asks Hallis what she must do now that he's dead. A Wolverine survivor, who Trish disbelievingly recognized as a fellow warrior, comes out of the jungle and approaches her as she stands over Franklin's grave and wonders what to do. The woman is heavily scarred, and hobbled badly from her injuries. Reassured by the warrior that their people would survive so long as a single member lives, Trish hugs the survivor and finds renewed hope.
  
As the pitiful remnant of Wolverine survivors resumes their trek towards the Inner Sphere, by astounding coincidence they are joined by the [[Yukon (Individual WarShip)|SLS ''Yukon'']] in September 2824, crewed by the Wolverine ''sibko'' that the Ghost Bear sentry allowed to escape. Trish Ebon welcomes them and declares that the Wolverine family is finally complete, and that they can now move forward on their mission.
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As the pitiful remnant of Wolverine survivors resumes their trek towards the Inner Sphere, by astounding coincidence they are joined by the SLS ''[[Yukon]]'' in September 2824, crewed by the Wolverine ''sibko'' that the Ghost Bear sentry allowed to escape. Trish Ebon welcomes them and declares that the Wolverine family is finally complete, and that they can now move forward on their mission.
  
 
On 28 January [[2825]] Snow Raven Khans Merrell and McKenna supervise the rebuilding efforts in Dehra Dun. While McKenna is throwing himself into the reconstruction of the Snow Raven capital, Merrell's feelings of guilt about her role in its destruction and the resulting bloodbath make her hate the sight of it. Merrell is joined by the ilKhan, who assures her that the city will be fully restored, better than before. Merrell questions that assertion, since the lives lost cannot be replaced as easily as the buildings, and the cover story has done nothing to erase her personal guilt about the true events as they played out. Nicholas answers that "there is no lie if we all believe it."  In that context, he asserts that "Barbados never happened," that the Wolverines were entirely at fault at Dehra Dun for refusing to conform, and that the genocide of the Wolverines alongside the execution of the true culprit was akin to a surgeon removing cancerous cells from the whole body. He tells Merrell that he is not twisting history; just giving Clan society a sense of meaning in the events of the Wolverine annihilation and a feeling that their cause was right and just. The details are irrelevant to the outcome — passing key messages and lessons to future generations and establishing their moral code. So long as the lesson on how selfishness, arrogance, and nonconformity leads to society's ruin was passed down, it did not matter if the stories laid the blame on Jason Karrige or Clan Wolverine.
 
On 28 January [[2825]] Snow Raven Khans Merrell and McKenna supervise the rebuilding efforts in Dehra Dun. While McKenna is throwing himself into the reconstruction of the Snow Raven capital, Merrell's feelings of guilt about her role in its destruction and the resulting bloodbath make her hate the sight of it. Merrell is joined by the ilKhan, who assures her that the city will be fully restored, better than before. Merrell questions that assertion, since the lives lost cannot be replaced as easily as the buildings, and the cover story has done nothing to erase her personal guilt about the true events as they played out. Nicholas answers that "there is no lie if we all believe it."  In that context, he asserts that "Barbados never happened," that the Wolverines were entirely at fault at Dehra Dun for refusing to conform, and that the genocide of the Wolverines alongside the execution of the true culprit was akin to a surgeon removing cancerous cells from the whole body. He tells Merrell that he is not twisting history; just giving Clan society a sense of meaning in the events of the Wolverine annihilation and a feeling that their cause was right and just. The details are irrelevant to the outcome — passing key messages and lessons to future generations and establishing their moral code. So long as the lesson on how selfishness, arrogance, and nonconformity leads to society's ruin was passed down, it did not matter if the stories laid the blame on Jason Karrige or Clan Wolverine.
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* ''[[Vincent]]''-class corvette (''[[Badger (Individual Vincent-class WarShip)|Badger]]'')
 
* ''[[Vincent]]''-class corvette (''[[Badger (Individual Vincent-class WarShip)|Badger]]'')
 
* ''[[Whirlwind]]''-class destroyer (''[[Weasel]]'')
 
* ''[[Whirlwind]]''-class destroyer (''[[Weasel]]'')
* WarShips of unspecified class: ''[[Buccaneer (Individual WarShip)|Buccaneer]]'', ''[[Hunter's Pride (Individual WarShip)|Hunter's Pride]]'', ''[[Michigan]]'', ''[[Mustang (Individual WarShip)|Mustang]]'', ''[[Rickenbacker]]'', ''[[Rough Rider (Individual WarShip)|Rough Rider]]'', ''[[Yukon (Individual WarShip)|Yukon]]''
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* WarShips of unspecified class: ''[[Buccaneer (Individual WarShip)|Buccaneer]]'', ''[[Hunter's Pride (Individual WarShip)|Hunter's Pride]]'', ''[[Michigan]]'', ''[[Mustang (Individual WarShip)|Mustang]]'', ''[[Rickenbacker]]'', ''[[Rough Rider (Individual WarShip)|Rough Rider]]'', ''[[Yukon]]''
  
 
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* Although a Khan of Clan Fire Mandrill appears in this story, his or her name is not given in the text, leaving it open if it is supposed to be [[Raymond Sainze]] or [[Laura Payne]].
 
* Although a Khan of Clan Fire Mandrill appears in this story, his or her name is not given in the text, leaving it open if it is supposed to be [[Raymond Sainze]] or [[Laura Payne]].
 
* Historical data was not only purged to cover up the truth, but also edited, falsified and fabricated to fill in the gaps, as shown in the epilogue. The recordings of the pivotal Great Council sessions on 10 and 11 October 2823 where Sarah McEvedy announces her Clan's secession were recut and had parts added to become the recording of an alleged session on 8 October that [[Phelan Kell]] presented some 250 years later in the ''[[The Clans: Warriors of Kerensky|Warriors of Kerensky]]'' document, which gives a distinctly different impression of what really happened.
 
* Historical data was not only purged to cover up the truth, but also edited, falsified and fabricated to fill in the gaps, as shown in the epilogue. The recordings of the pivotal Great Council sessions on 10 and 11 October 2823 where Sarah McEvedy announces her Clan's secession were recut and had parts added to become the recording of an alleged session on 8 October that [[Phelan Kell]] presented some 250 years later in the ''[[The Clans: Warriors of Kerensky|Warriors of Kerensky]]'' document, which gives a distinctly different impression of what really happened.
* The story was controversial with some [[BattleTech]] fans<ref>See [http://battlecorps.com/community/viewtopic.php?t=4146 BattleCorps discussion thread] about the series (dead link)</ref> because Pardoe wrote the story of Clan Wolverine's annihilation differently from how it had been presented in the past (especially Phelan Kell's aforementioned report): The reviled "Not-Named Clan" was revealed to have actually been acting in a noble and honorable way in this story. In contrast to the official record, they were singled out by Nicholas Kerensky as an example for those who would oppose his vision. And while the Absorption had been escalated into an Annihilation by Karrige's personal grudge, Kerensky still turned a blind eye to the other Clans' weariness of the Wolverines’ growing power and prideful independence. In Nicholas' mind, this served to make them a lightning rod against which he could rally the other Clans behind him to remove the risk of nonconformity shattering the unity his newly created Clan culture achieved after the Pentagon Civil War.<br />This was not entirely new information though. It should be noted that then-[[Line Developer]] [[Randall N. Bills]] had previously written the first two parts of the [[Founding of the Clans]] trilogy which already portrayed Nicholas Kerensky as a manipulative sociopath who built a personality cult around himself and was readily prepared to kill or instigate civil war among his people to further his agenda of creating an all-new society. However, initially only the German translations of these two novels saw publication. ''[[Fall from Glory]]'', the first part, was finally published in English until November 2007, long after ''Betrayal of Ideals''. Following the success of the [[2019 Clan Invasion crowdfunding campaign]], the first two books revised and expanded and the third completed and the entire trilogy finally saw publication in English.
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* The story was controversial with some [[BattleTech]] fans<ref>See [http://battlecorps.com/community/viewtopic.php?t=4146 BattleCorps discussion thread] about the series (dead link)</ref> because Pardoe wrote the story of Clan Wolverine's annihilation differently from how it had been presented in the past (especially Phelan Kell's aforementioned report): The reviled "Not-Named Clan" was revealed to have actually been acting noble and honorable in this story. In contrast to the official record, they were singled out by Nicholas Kerensky for opposing him so blatantly. And while the Absorption had been escalated into an Annihilation by Karrige's personal grudge, Kerensky still turned a blind eye to the other Clans' weariness of the Wolverines’ growing power and prideful independence. In Nicholas' mind, this served to make them a lightning rod against which he can rally the other Clans behind him to remove the risk of nonconformity shattering the unity his newly created Clan culture achieved after the Pentagon Civil War.<br />It should be noted, though, that then [[Line Developer]] [[Randall N. Bills]] had previously written the first two parts of the [[Founding of the Clans]] trilogy that already portrayed Nicholas Kerensky as a manipulative sociopath who built a personality cult around himself and was readily prepared to kill or instigate civil war among his people to further his agenda of creating an all-new society; however, ''[[Fall from Glory]]'', the first part, would not be published in English until November 2007, long after ''Betrayal of Ideals'', and the second part, ''[[Visions of Rebirth]]'', was only ever published in its German translation and remained unpublished in English. Later, with the success of the [[2019 Clan Invasion crowdfunding campaign]], both books, as well as the unpublished third book, [[Land of Dreams]] (formerly titled Forging of Blood), were approved for definitive publication in 2021.
 
* Blaine Pardoe has written extensively about the American Civil War, and has been known to frequently insert references to the Civil War into his works. The shuttle ''[[Shelby Foote]]'' from this story (in the BattleCorps edition's epilogue) was apparently named for real-world historian [[w:Shelby Foote|Shelby Foote]], who rose to prominence with a work on the American Civil War and passed away in 2005. Another nod to the Civil War era seems to be the WarShip named ''[[General Stuart]]''.
 
* Blaine Pardoe has written extensively about the American Civil War, and has been known to frequently insert references to the Civil War into his works. The shuttle ''[[Shelby Foote]]'' from this story (in the BattleCorps edition's epilogue) was apparently named for real-world historian [[w:Shelby Foote|Shelby Foote]], who rose to prominence with a work on the American Civil War and passed away in 2005. Another nod to the Civil War era seems to be the WarShip named ''[[General Stuart]]''.
* The fighting over the Tiki cache on Circe extends to "Wombat Ridge", and a similar terrain feature is later named on Strana Mechty. This is apparently a shout-out to prominent [[BattleTech Forum]] user "Wombat". Similarly, the "Rooster Plains" on Circe are apparently a shout-out to prominent forum user "Roosterboy".
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* The fighting over the Tiki cache on Circe extends to "Wombat Ridge", and a similar terrain feature is later named on Strana Mechty. This is apparently a shout-out to prominent [[BattleTech Forum]] user "Wombat". Similarly, the "Rooster Plains" on Circe are apparently a shout-out to prolific forum user "Roosterboy".
 
* According to the author in his postscript to the story (BattleCorps edition), the historical annihilation of the order of the [[w:Knights Templar|Knights Templar]], who were later exonerated, served as an inspiration for the story.
 
* According to the author in his postscript to the story (BattleCorps edition), the historical annihilation of the order of the [[w:Knights Templar|Knights Templar]], who were later exonerated, served as an inspiration for the story.
  

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