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Blame that her commanders deflected fell onto warriors like Dawn, Wardens who were viewed as soft for their stance regarding the Clan Invasion. Having few chances at action during the years after Tukayyid because of this stigma, Star Captain Dawn was excited when her [[Trinary]] was selected for a raid on the [[Federated Commonwealth]] world of [[Cumbres]] in [[3057]].<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=ER:3052p58,59/><ref name=ER:3062p63>''Era Report: 3062'', p. 63: "Clan Steel Viper"</ref><ref name=SL>''Star Lord'', chs. 3, 5</ref> Blame that her commanders deflected fell onto warriors like Dawn, Wardens who were viewed as soft for their stance regarding the Clan Invasion. Having few chances at action during the years after Tukayyid because of this stigma, Star Captain Dawn was excited when her [[Trinary]] was selected for a raid on the [[Federated Commonwealth]] world of [[Cumbres]] in [[3057]].<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=ER:3052p58,59/><ref name=ER:3062p63>''Era Report: 3062'', p. 63: "Clan Steel Viper"</ref><ref name=SL>''Star Lord'', chs. 3, 5</ref>
− {{Quote|'''''Hail and tremble at my ''batchall'', for you stand against the Fourth Viper Guards and your destiny awaits you. Twenty-fourth Lyran Guards, this is Star Captain Dawn of the Steel Viper Clan, upholders of the true heritage of the mighty Kerenskys, keepers of the honor of the Clans. With what forces do you defend?''''' + {{Quote|'''''Hail and tremble at my batchall, for you stand against the Fourth Viper Guards and your destiny awaits you. Twenty-fourth Lyran Guards, this is Star Captain Dawn of the Steel Viper Clan, upholders of the true heritage of the mighty Kerenskys, keepers of the honor of the Clans. With what forces do you defend?'''''
--'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}} --'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}}
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Blame that her commanders deflected fell onto warriors like Dawn, Wardens who were viewed as soft for their stance regarding the Clan Invasion. Having few chances at action during the years after Tukayyid because of this stigma, Star Captain Dawn was excited when her [[Trinary]] was selected for a raid on the [[Federated Commonwealth]] world of [[Cumbres]] in [[3057]].<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=ER:3052p58,59/><ref name=ER:3062p63>''Era Report: 3062'', p. 63: "Clan Steel Viper"</ref><ref name=SL>''Star Lord'', chs. 3, 5</ref> | Blame that her commanders deflected fell onto warriors like Dawn, Wardens who were viewed as soft for their stance regarding the Clan Invasion. Having few chances at action during the years after Tukayyid because of this stigma, Star Captain Dawn was excited when her [[Trinary]] was selected for a raid on the [[Federated Commonwealth]] world of [[Cumbres]] in [[3057]].<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=ER:3052p58,59/><ref name=ER:3062p63>''Era Report: 3062'', p. 63: "Clan Steel Viper"</ref><ref name=SL>''Star Lord'', chs. 3, 5</ref> | ||
− | {{Quote|'''''Hail and tremble at my | + | {{Quote|'''''Hail and tremble at my batchall, for you stand against the Fourth Viper Guards and your destiny awaits you. Twenty-fourth Lyran Guards, this is Star Captain Dawn of the Steel Viper Clan, upholders of the true heritage of the mighty Kerenskys, keepers of the honor of the Clans. With what forces do you defend?''''' |
--'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}} | --'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}} |