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--'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}} --'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}}
− Things did not go as planned when an unexpected force equipped with noticeably advanced '[[Mech]] technology was encountered on the surface, in addition to a [[24th Lyran Guards]] company that was expected to be there. After surviving a fierce crossfire, Dawn escaped alongside two others, after having ordered a withdrawal back to their [[DropShips]]. This time, she had been commander of the operation as the ranking member of the raiding force.<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=SL/> + Things did not go as planned when an unexpected force equipped with noticeably advanced '[[Mech]] technology was encountered on the surface, in addition to the presence of an expected [[24th Lyran Guards]] company. After surviving a fierce crossfire, Dawn escaped alongside two others, after having ordered a withdrawal back to their [[DropShips]]. This time, she had been commander of the operation as the ranking member of the raiding force.<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=SL/>
[[File:Brett Andrews1.jpg|left|thumb|115px|Brett Andrews sought to eliminate Wardens like Dawn from the Steel Vipers.]] [[File:Brett Andrews1.jpg|left|thumb|115px|Brett Andrews sought to eliminate Wardens like Dawn from the Steel Vipers.]]
Dawn was charged with incompetence and conduct unbecoming of a warrior, charges that she knew were false but felt somewhat powerless to refute in light of her life's events. She was to be tried before a Steel Viper [[Clan Council]] held on [[Jabuka]]. Dawn was unaware that her commanding officer, Brett Andrews, had spoken with and secured agreement to a verdict of guilty with many of the Steel Viper Bloodnamed warriors beforehand. Andrews felt that Dawn and other Wardens like her were a weakness to the Clan and had led to the Steel Vipers' defeats at Tukayyid and since. He sought to shift the Viper political balance toward the Crusader philosophy, while simultaneously deflecting blame away from himself as the overall commander of his [[Cluster]] during many of these failures.<ref name=SL/><ref>''Field Manual: Warden Clans'', p. 142: "saKhan Brett Andrews"</ref> Dawn was charged with incompetence and conduct unbecoming of a warrior, charges that she knew were false but felt somewhat powerless to refute in light of her life's events. She was to be tried before a Steel Viper [[Clan Council]] held on [[Jabuka]]. Dawn was unaware that her commanding officer, Brett Andrews, had spoken with and secured agreement to a verdict of guilty with many of the Steel Viper Bloodnamed warriors beforehand. Andrews felt that Dawn and other Wardens like her were a weakness to the Clan and had led to the Steel Vipers' defeats at Tukayyid and since. He sought to shift the Viper political balance toward the Crusader philosophy, while simultaneously deflecting blame away from himself as the overall commander of his [[Cluster]] during many of these failures.<ref name=SL/><ref>''Field Manual: Warden Clans'', p. 142: "saKhan Brett Andrews"</ref>
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--'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}} | --'''Star Captain Dawn's ''[[batchall]]'' at the raid on Cumbres.'''<ref>''Star Lord'', ch. 3</ref>}} | ||
− | Things did not go as planned when an unexpected force equipped with noticeably advanced '[[Mech]] technology was encountered on the surface, in addition to | + | Things did not go as planned when an unexpected force equipped with noticeably advanced '[[Mech]] technology was encountered on the surface, in addition to the presence of an expected [[24th Lyran Guards]] company. After surviving a fierce crossfire, Dawn escaped alongside two others, after having ordered a withdrawal back to their [[DropShips]]. This time, she had been commander of the operation as the ranking member of the raiding force.<ref name=ER:3062p99/><ref name=SL/> |
[[File:Brett Andrews1.jpg|left|thumb|115px|Brett Andrews sought to eliminate Wardens like Dawn from the Steel Vipers.]] | [[File:Brett Andrews1.jpg|left|thumb|115px|Brett Andrews sought to eliminate Wardens like Dawn from the Steel Vipers.]] | ||
Dawn was charged with incompetence and conduct unbecoming of a warrior, charges that she knew were false but felt somewhat powerless to refute in light of her life's events. She was to be tried before a Steel Viper [[Clan Council]] held on [[Jabuka]]. Dawn was unaware that her commanding officer, Brett Andrews, had spoken with and secured agreement to a verdict of guilty with many of the Steel Viper Bloodnamed warriors beforehand. Andrews felt that Dawn and other Wardens like her were a weakness to the Clan and had led to the Steel Vipers' defeats at Tukayyid and since. He sought to shift the Viper political balance toward the Crusader philosophy, while simultaneously deflecting blame away from himself as the overall commander of his [[Cluster]] during many of these failures.<ref name=SL/><ref>''Field Manual: Warden Clans'', p. 142: "saKhan Brett Andrews"</ref> | Dawn was charged with incompetence and conduct unbecoming of a warrior, charges that she knew were false but felt somewhat powerless to refute in light of her life's events. She was to be tried before a Steel Viper [[Clan Council]] held on [[Jabuka]]. Dawn was unaware that her commanding officer, Brett Andrews, had spoken with and secured agreement to a verdict of guilty with many of the Steel Viper Bloodnamed warriors beforehand. Andrews felt that Dawn and other Wardens like her were a weakness to the Clan and had led to the Steel Vipers' defeats at Tukayyid and since. He sought to shift the Viper political balance toward the Crusader philosophy, while simultaneously deflecting blame away from himself as the overall commander of his [[Cluster]] during many of these failures.<ref name=SL/><ref>''Field Manual: Warden Clans'', p. 142: "saKhan Brett Andrews"</ref> |