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- 19:09, 18 August 2020 diff hist +1 Bolin →History: ComGuard --> Com Guard Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 19:08, 18 August 2020 diff hist +39 Bolin →History: Applied some formatting fixes because of how the article displayed, and finished a sentence I had left half-completed (oops!) Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 19:02, 18 August 2020 diff hist +34 Bolin →History: The original I found today was very badly written -- strange word choices and confusing sentence structure in several places. I have re-written it almost completely. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 16:11, 18 August 2020 diff hist +323 Alpha Galaxy (Clan Smoke Jaguar) →Tukayyid: The 2nd half of the 1st paragraph, regarding the story of the Elemental Bolin, was terrrrrribly written. It was not comprehensible, the wording had been so badly mangled. I went to the source, found and read the scenario, then re-wrote... Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 15:05, 18 August 2020 diff hist -1 List of Bloodnames →Clan Mongoose: Removed an unnecessary comma. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 17:40, 14 August 2020 diff hist 0 Executioner (Gladiator) →Description: Grammar in last sentence. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 19:07, 9 August 2020 diff hist +4 2nd Sword of Light →Operation Bulldog: Added a missing "the" preceding "Third Jaguar Cavaliers". Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 19:06, 9 August 2020 diff hist 0 2nd Sword of Light →Clan Invasion: Punctuation clarifications. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 19:04, 9 August 2020 diff hist +49 2nd Sword of Light →Dromini VI: Better wording. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 18:42, 9 August 2020 diff hist -34 2nd Sword of Light →Fourth Battle of Mallory's World: Many small missing words and incorrectly formed sentences fixed. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 18:29, 9 August 2020 diff hist +13 2nd Sword of Light →Third Succession War: Cleaned up a number of sentences in the 2nd paragraph. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 18:26, 9 August 2020 diff hist +4 2nd Sword of Light →Third Succession War: Added a needed "the" in the first sentence. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 14:22, 8 August 2020 diff hist -8 Clan Smoke Jaguar →The Golden Century: Re-wording in the 3rd paragraph. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 13:57, 8 August 2020 diff hist +5 Clan Smoke Jaguar →Operation KLONDIKE: Corrected many grammar and style errors throughout. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 13:50, 8 August 2020 diff hist -19 Nornian Tseng →History: Wordsmithed last sentence. It's better now. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 13:49, 8 August 2020 diff hist +2 Nornian Tseng →History: Added commas to make the 3rd/last sentence flow correctly. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 13:48, 8 August 2020 diff hist -3 Karl Bourjon →Clan Invasion: Fixed a typo (orphaned word "a" in a sentence), then corrected grammar later by joining an incomplete sentence "A call that many fellow warriors agreed with" with the one prior. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 16:29, 1 August 2020 diff hist +3 Watch →Clan Hell's Horses: Fixed typo (added "by" between "provided" and "Clan Wolf") Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 12:19, 1 August 2020 diff hist +7 Clan Snow Raven →The Birth of Clan Snow Raven: Moved "during Operation Klondike, the struggle to reclaim the Pentagon Worlds" earlier in the sentence so that it flows better. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit
- 12:17, 1 August 2020 diff hist 0 Clan Snow Raven →The Birth of Clan Snow Raven: turned "during Operation Klondike..." into a correct sentence by making it occur after a comma. Tags: mobile edit mobile web edit