Editing Talk:Clan Goliath Scorpion
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I renamed, overhauled and shortened part about events of Forever Faithful. I renamed, overhauled and shortened part about events of Forever Faithful.
Segment used to read less like part of Clan history and more like overly long Misadventures of Rik Myers with Smoke Jaguars. Segment used to read less like part of Clan history and more like overly long Misadventures of Rik Myers with Smoke Jaguars.
− I renamed it to "Great Refusal and aftermath", changed tenses, shortened the text to focus strictly on events relevant to history of Goliath Scorpions and overall got it to read like history article. I left link to the novel itself as main article just in case. I also updated events of Jihad from RecGuides and Spotlight On Crimson Seeker Star which involved Scorpions. I will try to update 71st Light Horse absorption and Wars of Reaving as well down the road. + I renamed it to "Great Refusal and aftermath", changed tenses, shortened the text to focus strictly on events relevant to history of Goliath Scorpions and overall got it to read like history article. I left link to the novel itself as main article just in case. I also updated events of Jihad from RecGuides and Spotlight On Crimson Seeker Star which involved Scorpions.
--[[User:Warhawk14|Warhawk14]] ([[User talk:Warhawk14|talk]]) 22:20, 24 May 2023 (EDT) --[[User:Warhawk14|Warhawk14]] ([[User talk:Warhawk14|talk]]) 22:20, 24 May 2023 (EDT)
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I renamed, overhauled and shortened part about events of Forever Faithful. | I renamed, overhauled and shortened part about events of Forever Faithful. | ||
Segment used to read less like part of Clan history and more like overly long Misadventures of Rik Myers with Smoke Jaguars. | Segment used to read less like part of Clan history and more like overly long Misadventures of Rik Myers with Smoke Jaguars. | ||
− | I renamed it to "Great Refusal and aftermath", changed tenses, shortened the text to focus strictly on events relevant to history of Goliath Scorpions and overall got it to read like history article. I left link to the novel itself as main article just in case. I also updated events of Jihad from RecGuides and Spotlight On Crimson Seeker Star which involved Scorpions | + | I renamed it to "Great Refusal and aftermath", changed tenses, shortened the text to focus strictly on events relevant to history of Goliath Scorpions and overall got it to read like history article. I left link to the novel itself as main article just in case. I also updated events of Jihad from RecGuides and Spotlight On Crimson Seeker Star which involved Scorpions. |
--[[User:Warhawk14|Warhawk14]] ([[User talk:Warhawk14|talk]]) 22:20, 24 May 2023 (EDT) | --[[User:Warhawk14|Warhawk14]] ([[User talk:Warhawk14|talk]]) 22:20, 24 May 2023 (EDT) |