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Line 34: ''Their fate was to end up buried under tons of rock, entombed forever by [[Leftenant]] [[Kai Allard-Liao|Kai Allard]], giving and [''sic''] the Federated Commonwealth its first victory over the Clans.'' ''Their fate was to end up buried under tons of rock, entombed forever by [[Leftenant]] [[Kai Allard-Liao|Kai Allard]], giving and [''sic''] the Federated Commonwealth its first victory over the Clans.'' − ''This scenario pack recreates the battles for [[Twycross]], with 15 BattleTech scenarios and 1 [[BattleForce|Battleforce]][[The Battle for Twycross#note2|<sup>(sic)</sup>]] scenario, following the Falcon Guards from their greatest success to their final stand.''}} + ''This scenario pack recreates the battles for [[Twycross]], with 15 BattleTech scenarios and 1 [[BattleForce]] scenario, following the Falcon Guards from their greatest success to their final stand.''}} ==Contents== ==Contents== Line 72:
Line 72: *<span id="note1">In the credits, [[Steve Venters]] is incorrectly listed as the cover artist</span> *<span id="note1">In the credits, [[Steve Venters]] is incorrectly listed as the cover artist</span> * According to the prologue of the ''[[Falcon Guard (novel)|Falcon Guard]]'' novel by [[Robert Thurston]], Star Captain [[Joanna]] was together with Star Colonel Adler Malthus at the Great Gash and was one of the survivors, buried by rock as [[Kai Allard-Liao]] detonated the mines by overloading the reactor of his ''[[Hatchetman]]''. According to The Battle for Twycross scenario, the Great Gash was attacked by the [[Falcon Guard]] Trinary Alpha. Star Captain Joanna is not in the Trinary Alpha unit roster, in fact she is not even mentioned as a member of the whole Falcon Guards Cluster. This is probably a retcon of Robert Thurston because his book was published one year after the scenario. * According to the prologue of the ''[[Falcon Guard (novel)|Falcon Guard]]'' novel by [[Robert Thurston]], Star Captain [[Joanna]] was together with Star Colonel Adler Malthus at the Great Gash and was one of the survivors, buried by rock as [[Kai Allard-Liao]] detonated the mines by overloading the reactor of his ''[[Hatchetman]]''. According to The Battle for Twycross scenario, the Great Gash was attacked by the [[Falcon Guard]] Trinary Alpha. Star Captain Joanna is not in the Trinary Alpha unit roster, in fact she is not even mentioned as a member of the whole Falcon Guards Cluster. This is probably a retcon of Robert Thurston because his book was published one year after the scenario. − *<span id="note2">The non-BattleTech scenario included, "Thunder of the Gods," is actually a [[BattleTroops]] scenario.</span> ==Foreign-Language Editions== ==Foreign-Language Editions== Line 93:
Line 92: ====Alterations==== ====Alterations==== The German edition vastly matches the original one, with only slight variations: The German edition vastly matches the original one, with only slight variations: − * The BattleTroops scenario is left out. + * The BattleForce scenario is left out. * The initial outline gives no hierarchy of chapters and subsections, consequently the German outline contains a few additional bullets. The additional headings are: * The initial outline gives no hierarchy of chapters and subsections, consequently the German outline contains a few additional bullets. The additional headings are: ** The chapter "Einführung" (''Introduction'') is followed by ** The chapter "Einführung" (''Introduction'') is followed by
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''Their fate was to end up buried under tons of rock, entombed forever by [[Leftenant]] [[Kai Allard-Liao|Kai Allard]], giving and [''sic''] the Federated Commonwealth its first victory over the Clans.'' | ''Their fate was to end up buried under tons of rock, entombed forever by [[Leftenant]] [[Kai Allard-Liao|Kai Allard]], giving and [''sic''] the Federated Commonwealth its first victory over the Clans.'' | ||
| − | ''This scenario pack recreates the battles for [[Twycross]], with 15 BattleTech scenarios and 1 [[BattleForce | + | ''This scenario pack recreates the battles for [[Twycross]], with 15 BattleTech scenarios and 1 [[BattleForce]] scenario, following the Falcon Guards from their greatest success to their final stand.''}} |
==Contents== | ==Contents== | ||
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*<span id="note1">In the credits, [[Steve Venters]] is incorrectly listed as the cover artist</span> | *<span id="note1">In the credits, [[Steve Venters]] is incorrectly listed as the cover artist</span> | ||
* According to the prologue of the ''[[Falcon Guard (novel)|Falcon Guard]]'' novel by [[Robert Thurston]], Star Captain [[Joanna]] was together with Star Colonel Adler Malthus at the Great Gash and was one of the survivors, buried by rock as [[Kai Allard-Liao]] detonated the mines by overloading the reactor of his ''[[Hatchetman]]''. According to The Battle for Twycross scenario, the Great Gash was attacked by the [[Falcon Guard]] Trinary Alpha. Star Captain Joanna is not in the Trinary Alpha unit roster, in fact she is not even mentioned as a member of the whole Falcon Guards Cluster. This is probably a retcon of Robert Thurston because his book was published one year after the scenario. | * According to the prologue of the ''[[Falcon Guard (novel)|Falcon Guard]]'' novel by [[Robert Thurston]], Star Captain [[Joanna]] was together with Star Colonel Adler Malthus at the Great Gash and was one of the survivors, buried by rock as [[Kai Allard-Liao]] detonated the mines by overloading the reactor of his ''[[Hatchetman]]''. According to The Battle for Twycross scenario, the Great Gash was attacked by the [[Falcon Guard]] Trinary Alpha. Star Captain Joanna is not in the Trinary Alpha unit roster, in fact she is not even mentioned as a member of the whole Falcon Guards Cluster. This is probably a retcon of Robert Thurston because his book was published one year after the scenario. | ||
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==Foreign-Language Editions== | ==Foreign-Language Editions== | ||
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====Alterations==== | ====Alterations==== | ||
The German edition vastly matches the original one, with only slight variations: | The German edition vastly matches the original one, with only slight variations: | ||
| − | * The | + | * The BattleForce scenario is left out. |
* The initial outline gives no hierarchy of chapters and subsections, consequently the German outline contains a few additional bullets. The additional headings are: | * The initial outline gives no hierarchy of chapters and subsections, consequently the German outline contains a few additional bullets. The additional headings are: | ||
** The chapter "Einführung" (''Introduction'') is followed by | ** The chapter "Einführung" (''Introduction'') is followed by | ||