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The years since its foundation had made the colony suffer from a [[lostech|technology decline]] which had left their original cities to be relics of the past, which the actual inhabitants unable to create it. The years since its foundation had made the colony suffer from a [[lostech|technology decline]] which had left their original cities to be relics of the past, which the actual inhabitants unable to create it.
− The colony had not been in contact with the [[Inner Sphere]] for some 300 years when it was visited by the [[Explorer Corps (ComStar)|Explorer Corps]] [[DropShip]] ''[[Divine Providence]]'' in [[2973]]. The inhabitants reacted first coldly and the next day with fury when they discovered what they apparently considered lies from ComStar. They attacked the DropShip with the intent of killing the entire crew. + The colony had not been in contact with the [[Inner Sphere]] for some 300 years when it was visited by the [[Explorer Corps]] [[DropShip]] ''[[Divine Providence]]'' in [[2973]]. The inhabitants reacted first coldly and the next day with fury when they discovered what they apparently considered lies from ComStar. They attacked the DropShip with the intent of killing the entire crew.
In the fury of the moment, the ComStar crew turned the vessel's guns on the city, turning it to ashes and killing most of the inhabitants.<ref name="COMSTARSBp45"/> In the fury of the moment, the ComStar crew turned the vessel's guns on the city, turning it to ashes and killing most of the inhabitants.<ref name="COMSTARSBp45"/>
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The years since its foundation had made the colony suffer from a [[lostech|technology decline]] which had left their original cities to be relics of the past, which the actual inhabitants unable to create it. | The years since its foundation had made the colony suffer from a [[lostech|technology decline]] which had left their original cities to be relics of the past, which the actual inhabitants unable to create it. | ||
− | The colony had not been in contact with the [[Inner Sphere]] for some 300 years when it was visited by the [[ | + | The colony had not been in contact with the [[Inner Sphere]] for some 300 years when it was visited by the [[Explorer Corps]] [[DropShip]] ''[[Divine Providence]]'' in [[2973]]. The inhabitants reacted first coldly and the next day with fury when they discovered what they apparently considered lies from ComStar. They attacked the DropShip with the intent of killing the entire crew. |
In the fury of the moment, the ComStar crew turned the vessel's guns on the city, turning it to ashes and killing most of the inhabitants.<ref name="COMSTARSBp45"/> | In the fury of the moment, the ComStar crew turned the vessel's guns on the city, turning it to ashes and killing most of the inhabitants.<ref name="COMSTARSBp45"/> |