Talk:Scorpion Empire

Clean-Up

I just edited this new page for grammar issues by the original contributor and included some additional information from "The Wars of Reaving" and "Turning Points: Hanseatic Crusade." I'm still not entirely satisfied with it so I will come back for further clean-up and editing. --james benedict (talk) 10:47, 21 November 2020 (EDT)

• Edited for further clarity and added some additional material and details from Hanseatic Crusade. James Benedict (talk) 09:18, 9 April 2021 (EDT)

Great success

Big milestone accomplished

I finished adding massive amount of text and reference links I have been working on and in record time all you amazing people swooped in and cleaned it up to look nice and polished while expanding it with so much deep lore stuff I wasn’t aware of (old Elemental phenotypes and names being just one of many examples) and rearranging paragraphs in superior way

This now finally looks like a proper faction page and a damn good page on top

Best of all my complete cluelesness about page editing here didn't mess thing up, perfect scenario :)))

I'll be going over it from time to time to add any fresh references and more links to other pages where needed but that's all small scale stuff, the important thing is that the page is now fully rounded up

--Warhawk14 (talk) 16:40, 5 October 2022 (EDT)

Thank you for getting the revamp started. If it weren't for you starting it, people probably would've just sat on it for much longer.

--JHN13 (talk) 20:10, 24 October 2022 (EDT)