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This is a short story from Blain Lee Pardoe, that was published and released on a kickstarter from ctalyst was just trying to add acurate information from the story since moth was there at the beginning

Revision as of 13:49, 24 August 2022

Multiple issues

While this is a decent start at an article, there are several recommendations I can make to improve this article. I initially put a multiple issues tag on the article, but it keeps on getting removed.

  • Recommendation issue 1: This is a character article, so it might be a good idea to use the template for character articles found here: https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Help:CreateCharacterArticle. (I was originally going to use a cleanup tag for issue 1.
  • Recommendation issue 2: Please include the canon sources for this article's statements. This article needs canon references as per https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Help:References. (I was originally going to use a refimprove tag for issue 2)

Thanks!

75.23.228.139 12:44, 24 August 2022 (EDT)


This is a short story from Blain Lee Pardoe, that was published and released on a kickstarter from ctalyst was just trying to add acurate information from the story since moth was there at the beginning